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Old 07-23-2009, 01:54 AM
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Just a little something I cooked up while not doing anything.



What do you guys think? Does it seem interesting? Does it make you want to play cards? Is it something someone might use as a wallpaper? Is the exposure enough?

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Old 07-23-2009, 09:17 AM
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well, as a former magician i hate seeing scattered cards around hehehe. but it's a nice shot.
I had something like this before and I was told to come at it with an angle. so bring your camera down a bit more and add a background.
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Old 07-24-2009, 08:37 PM
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I Agree,, it is a nice shot (a very creative idea , I might add) but at an angle would be better...but I am very new still learning myself.
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Old 07-24-2009, 10:00 PM
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Firstly you should read the critique forum rules


Secondly, do you think it's interesting? If so why? If not why not?

I think it's an interesting idea but the execution could be better. Think about the composition and lighting. Is it telling a story? If it was someone elses pic what would you think, WOW or YAWN?
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Thanks to all your comments! Will work on my composition next time

And to Daytonj6: Wow! A real magician!
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Old 07-27-2009, 04:20 AM
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i agree, the angle a lil lower would be nice. it still a good shot
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