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Old 07-21-2009, 04:40 PM
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I was buying fruit and veggies at a local farm and noticed how nicely one of the windows cast light onto a basket of tomatoes. What do u think?

In terms of the composition do you think the subject is in the right place? Do you think less floor boards and more tomatoes/basket would have been better?
Would you have liked to see the window as well, or does the source of light look better as a mystery?
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P.S. this is unedited... i sort of liked it natural

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Old 07-21-2009, 06:45 PM
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i think that don't need to be edited.looks very good on natural.
i like colors and light. i love the light of the window.
Abaut the comp... more space on top can be better. and maby show all the basket that have the light on and cut the basket on the dark.

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Old 07-21-2009, 07:16 PM
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Yes, thank you so much... having more space on the top would help a lot. And you have great english, i can understand you really well
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Colors are good, natural, shadows do make it nice, but if you are able to capture the ray of light, it would have been better. Regarding composition, IMO i'd like to see the windows, or some other stuff as background to add to the story of the tomato basket.
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