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I am new to the photography world.. I just purchased a new camera about 5 months ago. A fujifilm S1000fd. So far I truly love this camera.. It has a lot of nice color and clarity to it. Far better than I expected.

All the pic I will post here are Unedited in terms of cropping. The only thing done is the Brightness, contrast, Etc...

I am looking for advice or tips on better angles, Composition, etc..

Thanks in advance to all who reply. I will be posting the shots from Flickr so all the info on the shots is there...

1) Small Town

Exposure: 0.003 sec (1/400)
Aperture: f/8.0
Focal Length: 17.1 mm
ISO Speed: 64
Exposure Bias: 0 EV

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Old 07-19-2009, 08:31 PM
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If you would take a minute to read this: Critique Forum Rules it would help us help you.
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Old 07-19-2009, 08:42 PM
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hey, denise, and welcome to dps.....

trader's right.....you do need to take a look at the critique stuff he linked you to........i was able to take out all the extra images.....i couldn't retrieve your exif.....but, your angles and composition question is good.....

if you have the exif, go ahead and edit your post so we can get on to some good critique.....

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Old 07-19-2009, 08:54 PM
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Ahh I got this thread confused with another.... Thanks... I know I read one that said you could upload 4 pics.. I got that confused with this one. Sorry about that...

Here is the infomation you were wanting...

Camera: Fujifilm S1000fd
Exposure: 1/400 Sec
Aperture:F/8
ISO: 64
Focal Length: 17 mm
Exposure program: Landscape mode

Is this the info you were talkin about? Do I need to add anymore? For some reason, all the info did not come up when I uploaded the photo. I think I wil try and upload it again.
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Old 07-19-2009, 08:56 PM
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that's just perfect, denise......
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Old 07-19-2009, 09:12 PM
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Default Uploaded the photo again..

I almost forgot.. I just uploaded the photo again... Here is the HTML for it... The EXIF should appear when you click on more properties this time..

1) Small Town..

Sorry for having to do this twice.. I have the hang of it now...
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As for composition, I find doing a quick crop with my hand that in the photo you posted, if you were to crop the right hand side equal with the shed roof that seems to be closer than the building, it looks a little more dramatic. Nice clouds by the way.
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