Aloof

[premk82]

shot of a window at a local market
shot with Olympus SP510UZ

comments welcome

[Elmo]

Nice Shot, my kind of stuff.

I like it except the color of the wall, the color seems unsettling to me.

[premk82]

Thanks for the comment Elmo.. jus added a bit of green tint to give the wall a rustic look...

[ncbcymtechie]

I agree with Elmo—the green makes it feel artificial rather than rustic. For rustic I'd have to go with a red or an orange, maybe a sandstone tan color, not green. It does add an algae look, but... it's just not agreeing with me.

Also I don't feel like there's quite enough sky in the shot... but if this was a shot taken in a place you'll never see again, then I suppose there's not much you can do. (Or maybe it's the sky blue color clashing with the green that bothers me.)

Nice artistic work, but fiddle with it and see what you can improve on!

[premk82]

Thanks for the valuable inputs ncbcymtechie..
will surely play around with some more colors and come back with another version..