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Following RickLumpas sugestion for oppening a new thread, here is a shot from a fireworks display in Lisbon and I was hopping to get you critiques.


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Old 07-07-2009, 03:21 PM
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Do you have any sort of ideas that you are wanting critiqued on your image?
Take a look at your image and think about what it is that you are wanting help with and ask that. You see, without knowing it is diifcult fo rthe viewer to know where to start!
And, it is asked for in the guidleines. (To ask a specific question)
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Old 07-08-2009, 02:49 PM
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Ok, sorry for my mistake.


My question is, the lights from the bridge that can be seen left of the blasts could be a distracting source? And also, is the framing and exposition ok, with the correct ammount of water altough the upper blast is cut?

I liked very much the final result, but of course, i would like to improve.
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Old 07-08-2009, 03:24 PM
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I do not find those lights distracting, what i would find more pleasing, would be a portrait mode shot of this, you did very well on the exposure,
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