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Did you have a question about the shot?
Personally, I think it needs straightened, and you could adjust your aperture to blur the background a little more. Unless your trying to tell a story, there is too much going on in the photo. I would also crop the right side some to remove the head and the edge of the bowl. These things are distracting. |
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i also agree the tv needs to go and the bowl as well.
i think a good background would be a black background, or maybe a beer poster (of the same beer) or maybe a top photo looking down into the glass.
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I think it is better to have the shot taken at a higher angle with the table top counter serving as background. This shot has so much clutter in the background especially the bright screen of the TV. A shallow DoF could also help in isolating your subject which I believe are the beer (glasses).
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I agree with other posts about the background too busy, a quick change in aperture value to blurr the background would do the job. on the second shot on the table top, we see a lot of the reflection of the TV in the beer and on the table so lighting is a bit weird.
If you ever come up to Montreal, drop me a PM and we could go for a couple of tastefull beers.
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