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I take several candid photos for my running group. I would like to improve my overall photography skills. I personally think this photo is a photo that I am proud to show off, and if you can share any pointers on this photo (or any other photo).

Question: How can I improve the photo? Do I need to line up the object of the picture in a different place? What should I have done differently in this situation?

Thank you for your time and support.
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Old 06-04-2009, 04:34 PM
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Personally, I like the composition. Having him off to the right gives the viewer a glimpse at what is ahead of him. I like that.

If you want a true silhouette, try darkening the him and the landscape in some post-processing, and, at the same time, play with the sky to bring out the color a little more. Just don't overdo it. Haha.

Nice capture.
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The foreground, hiker and the mountain in the rear are all quite noisy. Can you post your EXIF datat so we can see what you shot this at? Composition is very nice however.
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Old 06-04-2009, 07:55 PM
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EXIF Data:
Camera: Apple iPhone
Aperture: f/2.8

File Size: 304 kB
File Type: JPEG
MIME Type: image/jpeg
Image Width: 1600
Image Height: 1200
Encoding Process: Baseline DCT, Huffman coding
Bits Per Sample: 8
Color Components: 3
X-Resolution: 96 dpi
Y-Resolution: 96 dpi
Orientation: Unknown (0)
Software: Picasa 3.0
Date and Time (Modified): 2009:05:30 19:44:41
Date and Time (Original): 2009:05:30 19:44:41
Date and Time (Digitized): 2009:05:30 19:44:41
Color Space: Uncalibrated
Image Unique ID: 07710046a71230bab12f5c46b8cbddee
Gamma: 2.2
GPSVersion ID: 0.0.2.2
GPS Latitude: 36 deg 6' 59.40" N
GPS Longitude: 115 deg 25' 19.80" W
GPSAltitude Ref: Above Sea Level
GPSAltitude: 0 m
Compression: JPEG (old-style)
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I guess that's why photo is a bit noisy - my iphone took that photo (the batteries in my other camera died by that point).
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