Kiss at night

[DaisyThroughConcrete]

took this at a tuscan beach in the middle of the night. i know the heads are kind of blurred, but i like that effect. gives the kiss some kind of motion. i really like the shot and would love to hear your thoughts on it.

exif data on flickr

[peeperita]

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peeper

[oldwolf]

I like the composition and the colors but I'm not a big fan of the blurry heads. That's just my personal opinion though.

Looking at it a second time, about the only thing I might've changed is moving the horizon line a little lower in the picture so you see more of the night sky.

edit: Ok, I looked at it a third time but the large format on flikr. I know what I don't like about the blurry heads. Her head is blurred fine but his head is more blurred. I think if both heads were blurred the same amount then it would look better in my eye. I guess his head being more blurred just unbalances the whole thing to me.

[HockeyFan]

I like it. It's a nice effect, although normally I wouldn't expect a blur. It works though. I like the colors too. Nice.

[DaisyThroughConcrete]

Originally Posted by HockeyFan

I like it. It's a nice effect, although normally I wouldn't expect a blur. It works though. I like the colors too. Nice.

the blur comes because we were actually kissing, thus moving