Too Dark Dickens?

[NeverEnoughTime]

Hi All

Camera on tripod with delay timer but could not keep my hand completely still while holding the lighter.

This seems like it could do with a little something but maybe I need to rethink. I've tried using B&W and selective colouring of just the flame and books but I like to full colour version best. Only used Lightroom in post - maybe it could be a little lighter or maybe photofilter effects?



Camera Canon EOS 7D
Exposure 0.013 sec (1/80)
Aperture f/5.6
Focal Length 106 mm
ISO Speed 1600
Exposure Program Manual
Date and Time (Original) 2012:01:21 02:49:10.52Z
Subject Distance 1.08 m
Lens EF-S18-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Flash Mode Off

[phil24]

I really like this shot. I think it would enhance what the shot is representing to use either a long match stick or a burning twig.

[NeverEnoughTime]

Originally Posted by phil24

I really like this shot. I think it would enhance what the shot is representing to use either a long match stick or a burning twig.

Cheers Phil24. You're so right! It's the mix of new and old that's odd... You've got me thinking now that a lighter would be better suited to Stephen King or James Herbert. Many thanks John

[Zabet]

I was going to suggest using a candle instead. You have actually inspired me to try something similar if I can find some old hardcover Poe or Hawthorne...

[phil24]

looking forward to seeing the redo the candle idea is great

[JFSanders]

Maybe a oil lamp?

[NeverEnoughTime]

Originally Posted by phil24

looking forward to seeing the redo the candle idea is great

Originally Posted by JFSanders

Maybe a oil lamp?

Great ideas. Off to re-compose using new props

[NeverEnoughTime]

Tried the candle stick option as fresh out of oil lamps at the mo

I have attempted to improve the focus and detail by using a longer exposure, lower ISO, smaller aperture and better stability by tethering to laptop.

Do you guys think this is an improvement over the original?

Thanks for looking.



Camera Canon EOS 7D
Lens EF-S18-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Exposure 0.125 sec (1/8)
Aperture f/11.0
Focal Length 60 mm
ISO Speed 400
Exposure Program Manual
Date and Time (Original) 2012:01:28 21:53:48.01Z
Subject Distance 0.73 m
White Balance Auto

Old settings
Exposure 0.013 sec (1/80)
Aperture f/5.6
Focal Length 106 mm
ISO Speed 1600

[NeverEnoughTime]

Thanks to all for your help - it is so good to know other viewpoints. I have not posted the last version here due to rules but have decided to post it to the weekly assignment "Monochrome". Wish me luck... LOL!

"Monochrome Color" Jan. 18 - Feb. 1, 2012

[flytyer57]

In this second image, all I can think about is the wax dripping all over the book shelf. I'd hold the candle straight and use a longer exposure to see what the candle is lighting.