really long hallway

[eephie]

I took this picture while staying at some guest house. I want to know if the compostion is OK, is the picture over exposed? could it have been better? Any other thing I should consider if I were to take this shot again. What I can do to it, post production.



Camera: Nikon D3100
Lens: Nikon 18-55mm (kit lens)
Exposure program: Aperture priority
f-stop f/3.5
ISO Speed: 100
Exposure time: 1/25 secs
Exposure bias: 0 step
focal length: 18mm


Thanks

[Shutteraddict]

Cool shot. If I had to point anything out, I personally would have made the contrast a tad stronger. But for a higher key black and white it works. I can see using that location to do a twisted photoshoot with a model in a straight jacket

[eephie]

Thanks. This was my first black and white. would try playing with the contrast and see how it turns out.

[eephie]

No other comments? I take it the picture is really good (or too awful for word).

Please help me improve.

[sk66]

The picture is good, and the exposure is fine. To me the composition is slightly off.

The wall plate immediate rt is distracting, and the fire extinguisher is obtrusive. I think had you centered the hallway for more symmetry it would have eliminated the wall switch and reduced the impact of the fire extinguisher and just "work" a bit better.

[eephie]

Thanks. Thought about it but I had left the location