Grains in a Glass..First ever post for critique

[rohan-04]

So this is a picture i took with a DIY Lightbox, this is also my first post for critique and in general on this forum.So please tell me what you think and how i can improve.

If you have the time i encourage you to check my flickr stream and give me your comments on them. I'm looking for any possible feedback on my photographs.

flickr photostream = Flickr: rohan-04's Photostream

Thank you,
Rohan.

[ms45]

I like this very much... I just feel a bit funny about the light angle. Maybe bring it round a little bit forward so the grains aren't so much in shadow? (but then you'd be sacrificing the shadow to the right...)

[Bruce A]

Yes, if you could reflect a bit more light to the grains at the front would be better or try dodging them a bit. Very nicely done!