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Old 05-01-2011, 01:02 AM
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Default Rays from Okinawa Churaumi Aquarium

Hey started photography not to long ago, wanna get some feedback to get better. shot this yesterday at the Churaumi Aquarium in okinawa. Any critique is fine.
Rays and Fishes

Camera Nikon D90
Exposure 0.013 sec (1/80)
Aperture f/4.5
Focal Length 34 mm
ISO Speed 1600

EDIT: just notice that i posted this in the wrong section. can a mod move it to the animal/wildlife
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Old 05-04-2011, 07:29 AM
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I'm not a mod, so I can't move this for you, but I'll give you a quick critique :-)

I love the blue tone of your photo. The spotted ray is the brightest and is obviously the subject - really nice to see you got his whole tail too. The photo on the whole is a little busy for me, though being at the aquarium I know there was probably no way you could not get some other fish in the shot. You might want to try a little tighter crop, especially on the top, and if you crop the right side it would minimize the panels in the background which I also find a bit distracting. Also the "horizon" looks tilted to me, but that's a minor issue in this picture.
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