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Okay now I think this is good but tell me what you think.......its got the composition i was looking and the background i wanted and pointers?

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Okay now I think this is good but tell me what you think.......its got the composition i was looking and the background i wanted and pointers?
The horizon is very skew? Was that done intentionally? The front wheel and foreground is too dark. I would have tried to get the whole bike into the photo. That is my humble opinion as I am just an amateur.

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Old 02-08-2011, 12:20 PM
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the uneven lighting is usually to be avoided...
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