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Hi everyone, I recently embarked upon a spontaneous light painting session by the Louvre Pyramid and I just wanted to hear some critique about this shot, how it could be improved. Its a long exposure and there has been some colour correction (horrible orange lights!) but by and large its not what I'd call heavily processed. Apologies if you think its in the wrong section!
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Apologies I forgot to add the exif etc.../ reread the posting guidelines...
Nikon D300 25 seconds @ F20 ISO 200 18-200mm @ 18mm (cropped) Is there any way the light painting itself could be more prominent (not too proficient with photoshop and the like!) without making the image too dark?
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I've tried this light painting before and its a lot of fun. My thought was that maybe you could've moved the light slower - that might've made it more prominent. Otherwise I guess there would be something in PP that could do it - maybe dial up the blue saturation in PS?
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Cool shot there!!
If you could have done the light painting not directly on the museum part of the photo it would have looked even better. Maybe like your signature watermark on the shot
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