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I was experimenting with water drops and I thought this shot looked quite good, apart from the edge of the bowl in the bottom left corner, Do you think I should have removed this little flaw from the image? Please give any advice on how this picture could be improved. Look forwards to any advice you can offer.

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Old 11-10-2010, 08:17 AM
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I've gone back and forth, and I think that it should be removed.
Also, there are various black specks, and a white one or two, above the words that I don't like. As well as the two white curve-stripe things that are above the 'P' and 'D'. They distract me for some reason--which could just be me

But other than that...I really like it! The color and the fact that you are "bending with water" after being told not to

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Thanks for your comments. This pic was made up by using an fuji film envolope which is a little bit grubby. I must admit the specs of dirt i had not really noticed in the picture (well paid attention to), unfortunatly they are magnified by the water, but i can remove these with PS. I will also have a go at removing the curved white lines and the corner of the dish.
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Old 11-10-2010, 08:44 AM
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I am sooo nit picky when it comes to little specks! They can drive me crazy sometimes!

Also, you might consider fixing the bottom right-hand corner. The bowl begins to start showing there as well.

What would we do without PS?!
Good luck and I do hope you will post your finished product!
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Just spent 20 mins or so cleaning up the spots and removed the edge of the bowl/ white lines... let me know what you think.

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Ooooh!! I think it looks awesome now!!
You did a fantastic job with your edits.

I hope you are happy with it...you should be!
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Yeah, i think it looks much better now too. thanks for taking the time to look at my pictures. i will look at some of your work when i have time
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The extra effort in the edit paid off, the first was a little ... meh nice concept, poor execution... the cleaned one... well I might just have to try me that... doubt I have the patience, skill or equipment so I will just enjoy yours.
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