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Hi, been shooting for a couple of years. Looking for feedback.
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Old 11-06-2010, 10:38 PM
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Your detail is pretty good but you don't really have a main subject, the colors are good but rule number one is to define your subject. Keep shooting!!


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Old 11-08-2010, 01:57 PM
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Old 11-10-2010, 08:31 AM
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I really like it just the way it is!
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Old 11-13-2010, 05:41 PM
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I like the colors and the bokeh. A few bright spots that I find a tad distracting. Have you tried cropping this portrait style? The balance feels off just a little. Very nice shot overall.
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