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Old 10-26-2010, 03:34 PM
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A rare colour shot for me here. Just looking for general critique - composition etc.

The file has been processed a little in Ps (CS5 trial, a joy!), cropped, warmed and sharpened but little else. I like the golden light on the sandstone and the curve of the archway; I was thinking of cropping it tighter in but then you lose the curve.



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Old 10-29-2010, 05:40 PM
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Seeing as bumping worked for my other recent critique post, I'll give this one the same treatment... any critique welcome.
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I like the stark side lighting (although it's a bit bright above the faces). But I think the shot would've been better if it was all in sharp focus. I find the out of focus right side quite distracting. By the shutter speed, it looks like there was quite of room to increase the dof with a smaller aperture.
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Old 10-31-2010, 07:03 AM
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The right hand third being out of focus and the lean on it spoil the image for me, sorry.
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Old 10-31-2010, 10:06 AM
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Thanks guys. I was practicing with my new large-aperture lens hence the blur

Perhaps I'll try cropping it down a little.
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