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All feedback is very welcome I have only been doing this for a few months so every constructive comment is welcome!
![]() Wine By Candle Light by Ashey84, on Flickr Last edited by ashey; 09-29-2010 at 05:32 PM. Reason: wrong section for the original picture that was posted in here |
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Three composition moves come to mind. Remove the chair. Position the plant in an intentional way. See if you can get some light to come through the wine. The last one is probably the hardest as the theme is candle light.
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I think thats actually just the shadow of a wall plant thats up on the wall. I guess by intentional you mean me placing it in the picture?
At first I thought the chair looked good there but now you mention it I think it could have been better if it was removed and out of the way. Thanks for commenting I appreciate all the constructive comments
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I agree with the other comments.
The plant shadow is great, Ashley! You might want to consider using a taper candle that produces a longer flame and have that shine through the wine. Also, those are Champagne glasses and that looks like red wine? |
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Also its red food dye and water not real wine. And you are the first person to notice its champagne glasses haha Thanks for the comments
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Seriously, ashey, you need the proper glasses to make that shot credible, whether it’s red dye or not since you are simulating red wine. Riedel Wine Glasses - Crystal Classics, Free Shipping I do recommend using real wine and then drinking it during and certainly after the shoot.
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I know. Bad bad choice by me. I didn't even think about it until after the shot. The wine glasses were just one shelf above the champagne ones as well there is seriously no words that could describe my disappointment when I even thought about the error!
![]() I would use real wine but what might upset you more than me not using wine glasses, I don't actually like wine ha. |
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Seriously, try to use a proper wine glass for the "color" and see what a difference it makes in the shot. After all, you are not just shooting for the beer and pizza crowd or are you?
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