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Old 09-14-2010, 03:02 AM
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Hi this is my first post here, I just got my first DSLR and Im excited to share and learn from my pictures, and from this community, I just started taking pictures but I always wanted to do it, I always tough i had a good eye for things like pictures. Sorry if I don't know to much of the lingo in here but ill try my best. I am eager to learn from everyone in here so your criticism is more than welcome on my side and very appreciated
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Lightroom Effect: CC-Bleach Bypass and (Auto Tone)
Camera: Nikon D5000
Exposure: 1/400sec
Aperture: f/5.3
Focal Length: 247 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Off

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Old 10-13-2010, 08:48 PM
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Hi there,

This is a tricky one. It's a really nice shot but for my it doesn't quite work. However I am not entirely sure why. I thick the angle from which you are looking into the flowers is slightly off. The flower on the left is fine but the other two just don't work for me, if they were either rotated toward the lens or away, this would give better depth. Just a thought. I'm only a novice so this is just how I would look to better the image myself.

Good luck with the new camera, you are off to a cracking start
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