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Old 09-04-2010, 01:12 AM
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A wild flower

I liked the flower and the throne like leaves a lot, i feel it could be better shown, suggestions plz

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Old 09-04-2010, 07:35 AM
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Personally , i think the background is too distracting. You have stated WHAT you like, so show more of it and find a way to isolate it from the background(even if that means clipping a portion and moving it to a suitable lighting and background)
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Too dead center. try off center but I agree with previous, background is too distracting. Flower bigger would be better.
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When I look at it, all I see is back ground. I also think it is too centered.
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Old 09-06-2010, 03:59 AM
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I agree with the others. The background is too distracting. Try blurring it in PP
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Try blurring it in PP
Nooo! Just try again. You'll learn more from that.
Fixing mistakes in PP is not desired
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