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HI! Im new to this site, seems amazing. I am also pretty mes to Digital SLR Photography, so I'll probably be on here a lot looking to get better. My question about this shot is: Is it too busy? The main flower caught my eye from across the courtyard, but it seems that there is too much stuff i the background that takes away from it. I love the picture, but I would like some ideas about the composition. Thanks! (Of course, any other critique would be great too



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Old 08-09-2010, 10:57 AM
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Old 08-09-2010, 10:59 AM
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well, I'm no expert but I think that maybe yeah.. it is a bit too busy for me. I would try to crop it a little tighter..seems like a bit too much empty space in the top of the picture IMO. Pretty colors though
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Old 08-09-2010, 12:56 PM
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By the way, do you call it a lily? I am wondering if it is called orchid.
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Actually, they are stargazer lillies at the local state college. And thanks for the input! Like I said, I love the colors and such, but something about the framing put me off.
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