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This is a shot I took on a rainy day near sunset, and I quite like it. But generally, it doesn't seem to be a popular shot (based on views on deviant art and FB likes/comments).
So I thought I'd come here and ask; what is wrong with this photo? is it too boring? perhaps it would look better in a series? ![]() I understand that people like different things, and I'm not all cut up about it not being liked as much as I like it or anything, I'm just curious is all. (not to mention I may learn something) |
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I think it's too messy. The lines go everywhere. Instead of focusing the eye of the viewer into the subject, the lines are leading the eye away from it.
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I like the shot and don't think it is too messy at all. The lamp that is lit serves as a kind of anchor that holds it together for a very different but well executed composition.
However, you have to understand that sometimes the things we like the least are the things that just ran out of style. I am old enough to remember when disco was king; then its sudden demise. There was a time when no one wanted to make a move that looked anything like a disco move because that dated you and made you look unsophisticated. The same is true with selective color now. It was hugely popular for a while, but it has fallen quickly from grace and most people avoid it like the plague. I know that you were trying to draw our attention to the lamp since it is critical to your composition, but I think it is unnecessary. It will serve the purpose just fine in pure b&w.
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Thanks for the comments, and i can see what you mean about the colour.
However, this photo is as shot, strait from the camera. That's just what it looked like, and is kinda the reason i took it. But i guess if that's not obvious then yeah, people will think I've done some kind of selective colour and yeah, I can understand turning their noses up at it. Perhaps I'll try a B&W version, and see what it's like. |
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