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![]() # Focal Length: 39 mm # Exposure Bias: 0 EV # Aperture: f/5.0 # Exposure: 0.02 sec (1/50) Ok... as the title says... I am just getting started here in the world of photography. I have always loved photography but only now am I starting to get serious about it. I have finally progressed beyond point and shoot compacts to my first ever DSLR. My main problem is that I have never actually studied photography. Not one single sorry little class so what I know I have either picked up off the internet or by talking to friends who share my passion for photography. So what I am asking for is a general critique of my work to learn what I am doing wrong and where I could improve. Below are links to my flikr page for more of my shots. Please... The more comments I receive the more I learn. Let the constructive criticism begin! Thanks Mia Bettolo SpringTime Photowalk April 2010 - a set on Flickr Butterfly Pasta and Light - a set on Flickr Last edited by Saralonde; 04-08-2010 at 08:21 PM. |
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welcome! try cropping it at various sizes and angles and see what you get, i think a good cropping of this photo, would bring it more to life
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This image needs a small levels adjustment, that's all. Do not crop it, do not apply the Rule of Thirds, do not pass Go and do not collect $200. Some people need the Rule of Thirds and similar devices to help inform their intuition, others just do it naturally. I suspect you are in the later group so using a device like the Rule of Thirds would be a step backwards. Trust your instincts...use the force, young Luke.
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Lee R http://lucentbydesign.blogspot.com// The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes but in having new eyes. -Marcel Proust |
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I like the inclusion of the extended chain(upper left,) It shows the strength and purpose of it, for me. as a matter of fact: I might try another perspective- to see more of it- like shooting into the fence...you might even get a little bokeh on it, but not to worry, it crops out
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