Coursework Break

[mambo]

Hi Guys,
I was hoping you might be able to give me some advice on this picture. As a newbie to photography I have been playing around with a tripod i recently bought.

After spending far too many late nights doing coursework I have built up quite a collection of relentless cans. I decided to try and capture them running off into 'the distance' on my desk.

This is the first time I have tried any shots like this so any comments will be greatly appreciated.

Kind Regards

Mambo

[windrider86]

Very nice concept. A couple of little tweeks and you'll find it will really add to it.
First, it's just a touch too dark. Lighten it up a hair
Also have you considered mirroring it so it goes from left to right? The human eye generally will view from left to right first. Try and see what you think