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Old 02-13-2010, 06:53 AM
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I took this photo of a hairbrush hoping to make it look kind of clinical, hence the contrast between the brush and the surrounding. But did it work? is the focus not right...? i love takin g photos of everyday things and making them interesting, or at least give us a different perspective on them. But it doesn't always work! Thanks in advance.
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Old 02-15-2010, 08:46 PM
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Well done.

I like the perspective, contrast and DoF.

The only suggestion I'd make concerns the 3 white/reflection spots at the end of the handle (in the foreground). To me, those spots hold my attention a bit too much, and distract my eye from naturally moving towards the bristles. Any way to clone them out in post?

Good work.
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Old 02-15-2010, 11:06 PM
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I think this one worked quite well. Kind of gives the bristles a bushlike look. I'm not bothered by the light spots but do agree that cloning them or toning them down would probably help the photo. Nice work.
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Great shot! And a great idea! May start trying that muself!
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Fully agree with Chip but I see 4 or 5 of the blown out highlights. It would be nice to clone them out so the eye follows the handle better.

Otherwise well made shot. I'm not sure I get clinical from it, but I certainly get different and interesting. I could see this printed large on canvas (where the white spots might be more or less distracting) and hung in a hair salon or etc.
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