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Old 11-08-2009, 05:34 AM
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Default fairyslippers

Im new to DPS just looking for some tips, ideas, thoughts, and critiques... i shoot with a Nikon D60. any advice helps, thanks. PS if you just click on the thumbnail it will expand.
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Old 11-12-2009, 10:55 PM
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pretty flowers, I like the color and they have a nice little bit of yellow in there also. I would maybe look at trying a vertical crop of the left side as I find that the right side of the frame is not doing much for me. If you post the EXIF data you might get some comments from others.
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Old 11-13-2009, 02:24 AM
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I find that you have a nice colour combination in the yellow and the lilac in the flowers, and it is nice that both flowers are in the focal range, however I believe that the foliage to the bottom and the right are competing too much with the flowers themselves, perhaps masking them and blurring them a tad might help out. It would perhaps be a good idea when photographing flowers in the field to wander around the plant and take several shots at different angles. This one has a blade of grass disturbing the front flower, and the second flower is behind the first so not a clear shot of either flower, and they are each so nicely formed with no defects and have a nice drop of dew or rain on them. The photo is also excellent in its symmetry with one flower acting as rather a shadow of the other. Good luck in your critique
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