Singkong Butas

[Patchie]

I have here one of my macro shot in 5 sentavo. My camera is Canon A460. I just want to know if the shot is good or need some improvement and also give an advice how make more nice photos although my cam is not an SLR.

[jiminyClickit]

Patchie, Welcome

Many cameras that are not SLR are used to make very good photos here on DPS. You have done well here, in detail and composition. I find my attention keeps moving quickly to the left, so that I never quite get into the image all the way.

If the coin, lit as it is, were moved over to the right side, that might work better. Or if the lighting came from the right, so the coin's bright side was on the right in its left-side composition. In other words, it seems too dark on the right half+.

[jiminyClickit]

Patchie,

Here's an example of the difference in composition and lighting:



You might compare and reach your own conclusion.