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I would like you to critique on the exposure levels & focus in the above shot. It is a friendship band which a friend tied on my wrist on friendship's day.
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Good job, what camera were you using ???

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Old 09-11-2009, 06:56 AM
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Good job, what camera were you using ???

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Nice shot. The exposure seems fine. I would move your camera over to the right a little so that your DOF includes the letter d.
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I did try moving the camera a bit to right but then the F got washed out.
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The "d" being out of focus is distracting. Theres an inch or so to the right of "F" upto the washer that is still in focus. so maybe you could have moved the camera just a little bit further away and the whole word would have been in focus, or increase the DoF slightly. Other than that I Like it.
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Old 09-25-2009, 04:41 AM
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The "d" being out of focus is distracting. Theres an inch or so to the right of "F" upto the washer that is still in focus. so maybe you could have moved the camera just a little bit further away and the whole word would have been in focus, or increase the DoF slightly. Other than that I Like it.
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I Don`t know about it much .. but the shot is so nice .. =)
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Thanks 79oO9a.
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