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Old 01-19-2009, 05:20 PM
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Default Macro of the eyes.

I'm not sure if this shot would be considered Macro.
Anyway, I haven't posted in a REALLY long time. Once I got my camera, I was glued. I've improved so much and my creativity is shown so much.

Anyway, Please check this photo and let me know what you think!

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Old 03-09-2009, 06:37 PM
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Hi! I am not qualified to criticize your photo! you may post it in Macro - Critique and get a better feedback.
The only thing I would do if I were taking a macro for an eye is to concentrate on one of them, although I find the focus inside both eyes is really good.
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I agree with Busybee. Try to concentrate on one eye, as so to avoid having much out of focus foregrounding nose. Also the composition is a bit weird for my tastes. Nice use of B&W with selective coloring. You can also try to fix the redness in the eye's white.
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Old 03-27-2009, 09:44 PM
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Arrow Try it like this

This is me with my eye all focused and on macro with my Canon Powershot SD790
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Old 04-03-2009, 01:53 AM
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Thank you for your feedback.

I did focus in on one eye, but.. unfortunately.. I had my contacts in and it shows! I also think I over processed it a bit as well.

I enjoy it though and I hope you guys do too (:
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This is me with my eye all focused and on macro with my Canon Powershot SD790
Cool. A little blurry but it's nice.
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