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Old 09-19-2008, 07:04 AM
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Hey guys here is a shot of a guitar I took. I would love for ya to tell me what you think and how it can be improved!

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Old 09-21-2008, 09:45 PM
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Hrm...I'm not sure how much the focus being on the...Tuney thingies(yeah, reeeaaal eloquent here ) in the back helps. I'd suggest aiming for the strings next time, and see if you get a more pleasant result.

Other than that, though, my only major complaint is that thing at the right edge. That white blob touching the strings. It kinda distracts from the shot as a whole.
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I agree about the blob touching the strings, I look at that first, then surch for what is in focus.
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I agree. The glare from the nut is distracting in the pic.
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