Water Drops.

[Naked]

Hi everyone,and all members..
thru this photography school,i've learned many things about photography,and gain lots of skill on how to take photo.and it is very valuable for an entry level like me.so,after learning so much things in this forum,here is my shoot.but,i don't know whether i did a good job on this or not.so hope you guys can tell me for my further improvents.
Thanks.




Camera: Olympus E-520
Exposure: 0.006 sec (1/180)
Aperture: f/5.6
Focal Length: 42 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: On, Fired

[Naked]

thanks for viewing..

[mattwalsh]

As this is a critique forum, can you include the EXIF data. Nice shot though.

[peeperita]

Originally Posted by mattwalsh

As this is a critique forum, can you include the EXIF data. Nice shot though.

here ya go.....


Exposure: 0.006 sec (1/180)
Aperture: f/5.6
Focal Length: 42 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: On, Fired

naked, welcome to the site.....before your next offering, please take a moment to brush up on the rules for the particular section you post in......stuff like exif and a leading question can go a long way to garnering a good critique.....

thanks

peeper

[Hartzler]

Naked,

You've posted a strong shot with good technique. The one thing that stands out for me is the darkness of the water drops themselves, they aren't separated in my mind enough from the black of the background. It may simply have been an artistic decision on your part.

But when I see a picture of something like frozen drops of water, I want to see more of the clarity of the drop, the detail. I think this would be a lighting issue.

[Naked]

Originally Posted by Hartzler

Naked,

You've posted a strong shot with good technique. The one thing that stands out for me is the darkness of the water drops themselves, they aren't separated in my mind enough from the black of the background. It may simply have been an artistic decision on your part.

But when I see a picture of something like frozen drops of water, I want to see more of the clarity of the drop, the detail. I think this would be a lighting issue.

thanks Hartzler for the comment.i appreciate it..here's some photos with a bit lighting
do comments for further improvements,thanks