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I am just wondering how the composition is in this photo. Would anybody think it would be better from a different angle? Is it sharp enough? The only post editing I did was a crop on this shot.
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Old 11-01-2009, 03:02 PM
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I know nothing about the technical aspects - but I think it looks very pretty and I love the contrast bground
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Old 11-01-2009, 03:32 PM
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Hi Craig. Focus and DOF look great. I love this kind of pic. Only thing I would say re. composition is to position the subject a little off centre. I think it would improve the image. Thanks for posting this. PAUL
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Thanks to both of you. Your advice Preacherman is well taken. I have someone that wants to buy this print and I will crop it off center like you said and see which one they like best. Thanks again.
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Old 11-03-2009, 04:02 AM
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I agree the focus is great and that the pic should be cropped so the flower is off centre. I am not sure about that ball of orange colour on the bottom left hand side - ie whether it should be cloned out to green.
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