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Old 09-10-2009, 11:25 PM
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Default Oh the sweet aroma

So back when I first bought my camera (about 2 months ago) I decided to set up some shots. I sat in my room thinking of what I could do and suddenly got the idea of a wooden spoon with syrup spilling from it. I then set up a white backdrop, found whatever supports I could for the spoon, and found a nice cold bottle of syrup. Here is the result:


Camera: Canon EOS REBEL T1i
Exposure: 0.01 sec (1/100)
Aperture: f/5.6
Focal Length: 39 mm
ISO Speed: 800
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Off, Did not fire


I guess my questions would be:
What do you like and/or dislike about this photo?
What could I change to make this picture better?
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Old 09-10-2009, 11:54 PM
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Default sweet syrup

hello!

I am new to this forum and have not much experience (yet!). Still I wanted to say it's a nice photo.

By the way why don't you try to take the same photo but with the wooden spoon oblique ? So that we can better see the "pool" of syrup before it falls?
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Old 09-11-2009, 09:35 AM
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Really like the idea behind it, and the falling syrup looks really cool. However, i would have drawn the background tighter so there isnt any creases, as they are a bit distracting. Also, maybe a black background would be better for this shot, as the colour of the spoon is quite close to the background, so there isnt much tonal range.

Nice shot though
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