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06-14-2009, 12:07 AM
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Flower shots
Took few flower shots on Friday. Need your feedback on composition and what I could have done to improve it.
Cannon Xsi 55mm f/5.6, 1/320s, iso-200, Last edited by jiminyClickit; 06-14-2009 at 12:18 AM. 
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06-14-2009, 12:24 AM
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The Great, Welcome
Here's some reading for you that will save you some difficulty in posting. Basic Critique rules: Critique Forum Rules The rules are few, basically keep traffic fair for everyone, and give you a better Critique. Only one photo per 24-hour period is allowed in Critique, while "Share Your Shots" allows four (4). Whatever you post on SYS cannot be posted in Critique until after 24 hours has passed. That way, viewers don't see the same image in several places. Thanks for understanding.
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06-14-2009, 12:31 AM
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Having the daisy "looking" out of frame tends to send our gaze that way, so we're distracted from the composition. Moving it over to the right would keep our attention more inside and also reduce the amount of light background showing. Having more light on the petals would draw us to it more, also. Not a bad shot, just a little different setup could improve it.
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