C&C Please

[clearsky]

Yes! what do you think of the back ground?
the flower on the right side, do you think better if i was closer or this one here is good?

what do you think if it was in a black and white?


Flower 1 by starcluster100, on Flickr

Camera Canon EOS 450D
Exposure 0.017 sec (1/60)
Aperture f/5.6
Focal Length 200 mm
ISO Speed 100
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Flash Off, Did not fire


Thanks for you time

[windrider86]

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[clearsky]

Yes! i just Edited the post... ^^'

[Doug Sundseth]

The problem I have with the background is that the white flowers are almost exactly the same value whether in or out of focus, so the background obscures the edges of the foreground. Also, I think your primary subjects take up too little of the frame.

I'd recommend cropping fairly tightly on a limited number of flowers and working for as clean a background as you can get. For the in-focus flower on the upper right, I think you could move a bit to your left and get a nice, dark background that will highlight the flower very well.

It think that black and white could work with this subject, since the palette is limited anyway, but in B&W I would still recommend making the same edits I recommended above.

HTH