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This was taken right outside my house. After watering the plant, i just noticed this drop hanging down and thought it looked beautiful. Could you please suggest if the angle of the shot is good or should i have gone for something better? Any other general(or specific) critiques are also most welcome. Please do let me know.

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Aperture : f/2.7
ISO : 100
focal length : 4mm
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Old 04-08-2011, 09:45 PM
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I would increase the f-stop and have focus on the tip of the flower.
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Old 04-12-2011, 02:43 AM
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My wife walked by as I was looking at the full size version, all she said was Oh MY! Jim
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Old 04-12-2011, 05:34 AM
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um wow. somebody send this to pornhub. pronto!
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@Mikael : That would be good but my cam does not go further than that aperture.
@Jim : Alright. I get it.But you wanted a different angle and here it is.
@katia : he he he.
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Yes it does have erotic undertones doesn't it?
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Now you see what a different angle will get you?! Reaction! It causes the viewer to stop and look with intent. Causes them to see things that are not really in the picture. Bravo!

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Now try to accomplish it outside of the easy way to get a human's attention. This is where it gets hard. Think of the emotions we have and our reaction to them. You are learning quickly. Good luck.
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