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Elo merry people of DPS.

I have recently bought a Sony A230 and trying to learn as much as I can and this seems to be the right place!

Here is one of my attempt at Macro photography... Please advise what is good / bad... what could be improved...

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Exposure: 1/60s at f/5.6
ISO: 400
Focal Length: 55mm

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Old 10-03-2010, 05:02 PM
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Nice shot, the center of the flower is nice and sharp and the dew is nice and DoF is good. The only comment I would make is don't have your subject right in the center of the pic, in some instances this works well but I don't think so in this case. Nice pic.


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Old 10-03-2010, 05:10 PM
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Rule of thirds... Learnt about it after taking the picture... Thanks for the comment!
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Nice and crisp. I'd process it up a little to increase brightness, saturation and contrast, it's a little flat atm.
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