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Old 08-29-2010, 03:09 PM
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Hey guys
im trying to improve my flower photography
this is an image i took
by thinggy42, on Flickr">Bee on a flower <img src=" />
do you think the background is too blurred?
do you guys have any suggestions?

this is Exif data
Camera Olympus E-450
Exposure 0.013 sec (1/80)
Aperture f/5.6
Focal Length 150 mm

thanks heaps
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Old 08-29-2010, 11:53 PM
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lovely colors! It looks a bit dark on my monitor (though everything on flickr looks darker to me...); maybe try lightening it? I love the blurred background--definitely not too blurred. I might crop in tighter to focus more on the flower and bee...maybe take a bit off the left so that the vertical line is in a 'rule of thirds' position...
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Old 08-31-2010, 01:03 PM
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I agree with Rengles with a tighter crop,
I like the DOF , perhaps even more blurring.
Good sharp shot with good colour,
the shadow across the flower is a little distracting.

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