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Old 08-09-2010, 05:19 AM
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So when I took this shot, I liked the small lonely leaf being dwarfed and held in contrast with what is clearly a larger tree. I certainly would value feed back on color and composition, but what I REALLY would like feedback on is if it feels like a subtle story is being told. Is it even interesting? Etc....
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Old 08-09-2010, 10:06 AM
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Colours: Great.
Bokeh: Great.
Composition: Great with one note; I would crop the image a bit more but nothing too drastic.
Overall: Very pleasing image and I completely get a point of your thoughts when capturing it.
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I think it's very interesting and I love the story it tells. The leaf is nice and crisp and the background is suburb.

I would try for a vertical crop to accentuate your story, and especially, to crop out the distracting overexposed area on the right and help lead your eye to the focal point.
Great job overall.
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Old 08-10-2010, 04:57 AM
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Thank you very much for the feedback. ZinhaEq, you had suggested crapping it a tad. Where did you have in mind. And mbufis, is this the vertical crop you had in mind? Thanks again for the feedback!

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Personally, I like this crop much better... nice shot.
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Old 08-12-2010, 06:17 PM
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The cropped version is much better!!!
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This pic has been taken in the morning about 8 a.m. in overcast conditions.
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