India won Cricket match

[a73210]

Please suggest.
O clicked this image with my 18-55 kit lens and used a macro filter to get the effect.I know this is not the best one but I want suggestions how to improve on this

-Mukul

[Lightwriter]

I think more depth of field would really help. The word "beat" is just floating in a sea of blur. I think you aught to have at least the line "India beat Pakistan" in focus (or mostly in focus.)

[a73210]

Hey Thanks for the reply..and yes I agree to what you said.
I wasn't able to have more depth of field as I shooted this with my Kit lens...

and the focus thing...I wanted like India and beat in max focus and Pakistan out of focus(Dont want to hurt anyone sentiments,its just a picture) bt I was so close that I was able to focus only on one word.