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Old 05-28-2010, 07:38 PM
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Hello this is my 2nd macro attempt.

EXIF DATA:
Shutter speed: 1/8 secs
Aperture: f/4
Auto White Balance
Lens: 50mm with +10 macro diopter
ISO: 100
Time of the day: 2000hrs
Flash: Did not fire
Tripod used

Specif questions:
1.) How is the exposure?
2.) Composition?
3.) Any critiques you can come up will be welcomed.

Thank you.

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Old 05-30-2010, 01:10 PM
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No suggestions or comments, hehe thats bad.
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[On my screen] the photo seems underexposed. You might want to bump that up a tad; also it could also do with some sharpening.
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yah you are right, i find it difficult to focus with unlevel surface of the image. The DOF is uneven especially macro shot. I already bumped by sharpening, i dont want to increase the noise with too much sharpening. Thanks for the advice of increasing the exposure. I will do that.
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I like the exposure. It doesn't feel too dark and I like the composition.
I especially like the boken.
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