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I thake this picture with my Nikon D40x 18-55mm. with an additional macro lens
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Old 04-06-2010, 07:00 AM
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Hi, maxgui

Will you tell us, please, what can we help you with? Is there a concern you have about your photo? Could you include some details about how you took it (shutter speed, aperture, ISO, flash/no flash, etc)? This helps us give you better Critique.

It looks fairly sharp and is lit well, so I'm going to guess you are not a beginner.
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In fact i receive my camera two years ago but with two little babies (3 years and ten mounths) i don't have much time for photography......i have read so much forum and article so maybe i'm not a very beginner.....

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shutter speed 1/320 sec
aperture f. 8.0
ISO 100
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i think that composition is not so good but the color are really nice...thanks for comment
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If a bee can be made to stay on a bloom for several minutes, you may be able to get several good shots and plan composition. But that's rare, so wherever the bee is, that's your composition! A purist might want the bee a little more offcenter, but it would take a crop that would probably change your photo shape, or clip off more bloom, and I'm not sure it would look better.

It's a pretty good shot, I'd say. I'm glad to see you have read much, and with enough practice (as your children grow), you'll become better and more confident every day. It takes time, practice and knowledge, in whatever order you can manage.
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