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Old 03-03-2010, 07:20 AM
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here are a few shots from when boredom struck on a few rainy days



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Old 03-03-2010, 09:28 AM
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Hi!
Maybe double check the rules--I think these 3 should be posted as separate threads...also posting a smaller size might be helpful--for the last photo I can't see the entire thing in my monitor at once.

I'm no expert but here are my impressions:
I really like the concept and lighting of the last photo...maybe you could even lighten a bit around the stalk of grass to make it stand out?
I think the black and white, the dof, and the slight noise work well for the middle photo.
In the first photo I find the highlight really distracting...maybe retake this with different lighting...cute little elephant
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Old 03-03-2010, 10:17 AM
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thanks yeah ill keep in mind the size when posting next time im a noob haha
about the first one i might try a few different lighting techniques tonight and see how it goes

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