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I greatly appreciate if you can suggest me how to improve my shots. I like these photos but I have a feeling that there are sill room for improvement. Thanks in advance.

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I like your subject matter too, but this is more of a "record" shot, rather than an artistic rendering. Don't worry, I we all struggle to bring that fresh, artistic touch to an ordinary object. My suggestion would be to move in must closer, and frame the lines of the fungi so that they wave diagonally through the frame. Then I'd probably up the contrast to make it a bit more abstract. That's just my two cents for another option here. I think it's good technically, which is a great start!
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Old 02-21-2010, 08:48 PM
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Another option might be to shoot it from a low POV at either sunrise or sunset when the light has that rosy golden quality.
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Old 02-23-2010, 10:47 PM
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Please be sure to read thru the guidelines so you'll know what should be included. txs
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