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[mangomm]

hi again
im uploading this new pic
its a flower again
but this time i used the suggestions you gave me
i sharpened it a bit
i cropped it to move the subject away from the center
rotated it
and changed the colors



but it still isn't right..
i like the colors and details
but maybe its the composition??
what do you think?
what would you do to make it better?

here's the original if you want to compare

http://digital-photography-school.co...4-img-4431.jpg

thanks


Canon EOS Digital Rebel XT
Canon Ultrasonic 75 - 300mm
1/200 seg
220 mm
ISO 400
f/10

[Bhenoisky]

i agree to what u said.. i do love the vibrant color you captured and its details but the leaf on top of your subject made it look not so good to my eyes.

if you cannot avoid the leaf on top of it, maybe you can try some other angles or try repositioning your cam.. for you to have a frame with just your subject the you want your viewers to see..




hope that helps..
enjoy shooting!

[arsifferlen]

this is a good shot, but the lower left corner definitely distract from the flower. i think the shadow that is cast on the back of the flower is a tad dark as well, but the flower itself is beautiful.

makes me feel anxious for spring to come!

[mangomm]

thank you!!