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This is my atempt at capturing the landscape.
![]() I think it could have been better if I had cropped out the fence at the bottom. ![]() This lake was in Idaho instead of Montana
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I dont know if you were looking for comments or criticism but anyways here are my thoughts on how to improve the photos. 1st image the sky is pretty blown out and the colors on the mountains in the background seem to be pretty washed out. Perhaps creating different layers for the background and the forground and the sky and adjusting the levels/saturation/contrast will improve this image. Of and I agree with you that the fence has got to go.
The second image I think is well shot. the sky is a little bland and boring but that is nature. I do find that the two trees in the bottom middle blocking the lake are distracting tho. perhaps you could clone them out? Also that little snippet of tree in the bottom right corner.
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Thanks for the comments. I guess the sky color was due to it being 100 degrees and hazy. It is still beutiful country. I agree with your assesment. I am going to try to fix them and re-submit.
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I have tried to fix the problems you found. The cropped version of the landscape without the fence does look better. You be the judge
![]() I tried to enhance the colors a little, but the haze is still there
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it does look better, now just add in a great sky and lighten up the front a bit and you are set!
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yeah the cropped version definately looks better. but you left in the top of the swing set? or whatever it is. Also just noticed that there are some powerlines running thru the picture. perhaps some cloning will take care of them. If you dont mind I will try to edit the pic some to see if I can get some better color out of that background.
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This is a shot from another area that I think is better.
![]() As you can tell we were moving at the time, but it still shows just how beautiful the country is out there. This shot is just like it came from the camera.
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Now, this one I really like! A little crop off the very front would make it just gorgeous. I do know how beautiful Montana is as I'm from Billings. Kinda east but go a little further west and you get the gorgeous mountains
Good hob my friend!
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