Forgotten Wagon

[jay_deewilliams]

jay_deewilliams@verizon.net, on Flickr">

I really like this one allot for some reason

[Winning Post]

Its a nice composition, but maybe you could have shot it from a touch lower to get the rule of thirds with the wagon.

My only concern would be the large under-exposed area on the left and the strange bright red and green patches at the top. I can't see exactly what these are because I can't get it any larger.

Maybe also bumping up the saturation on the wagon itself.

[dimitrz]

Love the shot....seems like there was a lot of post processing the only part that I didnt like

Awesome concept and good shot

[jay_deewilliams]

Is this Bettter

[dimitrz]

Instead of overriding the first picture - it would have been better if you had posted the second picture seperatly to give a before & after effect.

It might be me but I liked the compostion of the first picture better ( though this is godd too - yet there was something about the first bit) it was more the clours that bothered in the first bit.

Just my 10 cents ( money is a bit expensive these days )

[Overexposed !]

I think this capture and edit is perfect. I like the hint of colour, the mysterious mood. I think the rule of thirds has been achieved horizontally. I wouldn't change a thing. Well done - jimmy