#1 (permalink)  
Old 06-25-2011, 04:49 PM
lunathea's Avatar
Adult nap time= win.
 
Join Date: Jun 2011
Posts: 219
Default Improving Building Shots?

I love architecture so I thought that I would really enjoy photographing random structures. So far though my photos have been subpar. For instance the photo below is of the locks in Marquette Michigan. The structure itself is incredible in real life. I can see some amazing night photos with the sun setting and the ships pulling in. However I was stuck with yet another grey boring day. I go between liking and hating this comp (however the picture of the whole thing looks incredibly bleh too) and I can't seem to bring up any creativity to help it out in post production. What would you do? Anything editing wise? How do you make your building/structure shots more interesting? What I wanted to get here was the feeling of how enormous this thing is but I feel like I failed. Thanks!
__________________
http://500px.com/Lunathea
http://www.flickr.com/photos/63274037@N07/
(currently being upstaged by 500px)
"For every shadow, no matter how deep, is threatened by morning light." ~ The Fountain
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 06-25-2011, 04:50 PM
lunathea's Avatar
Adult nap time= win.
 
Join Date: Jun 2011
Posts: 219
Default

IMG_6962

I apparently failed at linking lol.
__________________
http://500px.com/Lunathea
http://www.flickr.com/photos/63274037@N07/
(currently being upstaged by 500px)
"For every shadow, no matter how deep, is threatened by morning light." ~ The Fountain
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 06-25-2011, 06:43 PM
IABoomer's Avatar
Me + D5000 = happy
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Des Moines, IA
Posts: 1,272
Default

I had a little play with this in Lightroom. I've attached a screenshot showing the before and after with settings.

It looks to me like the camera might have metered more off the bright sky, leaving the detail underexposed and flat. As you can see, I bumped up the exposure and contrast, added some fill lighting to bring out some of the detail, then bumped up the blacks some to punch up the shadows a bit.

This might be a good candidate for an HDR treatment. I could also see stepping a bit more to your left and filling more of the frame with the structure. The sky on the left doesn't really add anything (even if it wasn't a bland day), and the change in angle could bring out more shapes and detail to the structure.
Attached Images
File Type: jpg locks In Lightroom.jpg (213.0 KB, 10 views)
__________________
My flickr

Samsung TL-210 P&S / Nikon D5000 / Nikon 35mm f/1.8 AF-S lens
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 06-25-2011, 07:25 PM
Nicole's Avatar
Super Fantastic Moderator
 
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Wellington, New Zealand
Posts: 9,225
Default

I think part of the trick is knowing what to shoot when. What I mean by that is if it is.a grey, cloudy day, focus on details that will avoid including the sky. Save photos that need the sky for days with more interesting skies. It's a bit sucky for days when you want to get out and shoot but you may find you challenge yourself more and get better shots for it.
__________________
Nikon D90 | Sony NEX-3
Nikkor 18-55 | Nikkor 70-300 | Nikkor 50 f/1.4D | Lensbaby 2.0 | Nikkor 85 f/1.8D | Nikkor 105 f/2.8 VR | Sigma 10-20 f/4-5.6 | Nikkor 10.5 f/2.8 Fisheye | Sony 16 f/2.8 | Sony 18-55 | 2xSB600 | Orbis Ring Flash Adapter
My Flickr
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0