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I took this up at a local park in Rockport, WA. It was a beautiful day but cold.
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Prelude: jay_deewilliams: I thought I was in "Critique" forum; then realized I was not. I still meant everything I said below:

jay_deewilliams,

Snowy Mountain, by my eye, is a lovely photograph. Your composition aligns well with what I have learned about landscape; that is, your proportions of sky and terrain. The layers in your photo contrast nicely. It is very pleasant to look at.

I cannot offer you any technical advice at this point. One thing I just noticed was the absence of detail in the deciduous trees in the forground; however, in some ways that may be a nice contrast to the clarity in the mountains. That issue may not have been avoidable.

Would like to see your EXIF.
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I agree with geo....you can not see too much in the foreground trees. However, it does bring the mountains into more focus which is great. I love it. Nice shot. Looks very cold.
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