Framed Down

[tallshot]

Hi
Here I present the second of a series of photographs recently taken from my 1.3MP cell phone camera. Here i have tried to have frame within the photo by using the window. Tell me about the composition ....



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Camera: Sony Ericsson W205(mobile phone-1.3MP)
(sorry cant provide any thing else)

[milosh]

Hello tallshot! I think your idea for this composition is good. I like the fact that the window is wider at the top and narrower at the bottom, which draws the eye to the bottom - to the street crossing, but my eye keeps going up to the bright part of the street and to the people. Maybe it would be better if the center of interest (which, for me, are people) was at the bottom, so that your eye stays there. Hope this helps a bit.

[leviathan]

Wow! Very interesting angle with some nice hard lines. Very cool! My one suggestion would be to tone down the exposure on the street. It's overxposed and is a little distracting because of the glare. Otherwise, very nice, especially for being shot on a cell phone!

[Greenhare]

Love the framing. It will probably make a different if the car is in a bright color, like red, instead of white.